Review is partially done. Another assignment may be needed to complete it. Reviewer: Zhen Cao Review result: Ready with Nits Reviewer: Zhen Cao Review result: Ready with Nits Thanks the authors for the document. DOTS server discovery is important to the functioning of the whole system. Important: I read Bernie's eary quick review (saying not a full one) for the 01 version [*] and the comments had been addressed in 02 version. And I think our AD @Eric needs to check if there is a need for further DHC doctor review. (although I checked there were not much changed on the DHCP parts from r02 to r11) . [*]https://github.com/boucadair/draft-ietf-dots-discovery/issues/1 I think most of the other parts looks quite ready except: a) Section 5.1.2 on the configuration of the ipv4-mapped IPv6 address. old: Note, IPv4-mapped IPv6 addresses (Section 2.5.5.2 of [RFC4291]) are allowed to be included in this option. I do not know why this is particularly mentioned here given there are many types of IPv6 address. I think it 's better to remove this statement since there are many issues configuring IPv4-mapped address directly. Some systems will disable (by default) support for internal IPv4-mapped IPv6 addresses. Some implementations of dual-stack do not allow IPv4-mapped IPv6 addresses to be used for interoperability between IPv4 and IPv6 applications. [RFC4038]. Such discussions do not have to be present here. b) the first sentence of the abstract: s/Districuted/Distributed. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
