Reviewer: Bernard Aboba
Review result: Ready
Subject: Transport Directorate review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework
Reviewer: Bernard Aboba
Review result: Ready
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-framework-10
Reviewer: Bernard Aboba
Review Date: 2020-09-08
Intended Status: Informational
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Summary:
This document is ready for publication. The NIT in the security
considerations section noted in the review of -08 has been fixed,
but no other changes have been made to address the prior review
comments.
Comments:
The document is short and clearly written. While it references
the requirements in RFC 8372, it does not refer to them, so it's
hard to verify whether this document does address those
requirements (and how).
Also, this document doesn't cover data collection or SFL allocation,
so there is quite a bit that is out of scope. This makes me wonder
whether an implementation of this specification could interoperate
with other implementations based solely on this specification.
Major Issues:
No major issues found
Minor Issues:
See previous review of -08.
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