Reviewer: Francesca Palombini Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03 Reviewer: Francesca Palombini Review Date: 2020-09-02 IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-02 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: Section 1: OLD: This extension was previously defined in section 4.1.1 of [RFC6960] NEW: This extension was previously defined in section 4.4.1 of [RFC6960] Section 2: The message format for the OCSP request and response is defined in the [RFC6960]. It also defines the standard extensions for OCSP messages based on the extension model employed in X.509 version 3 certificates (see [RFC5280]). "It" in the second sentence is ambiguous, I think it would be better to replace with "[RFC6960]". -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
