Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect-03 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2020-08-25 IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-10 IESG Telechat date: 2020-08-27 Summary: This update to CMS (RFC 5262) attempts to prevent algorithm substitution attacks on the hash algorithms. The changes seems reasonable, with one of them already being specified in RFC 6211. There are a few nits that should be cleared up prior to publication. [Ready with Nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Page 2, section 1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: change "associate" to "associated". Page 4, 1st NEW block, 4th sentence: insert "the" before "signedAttrs field". Page 5, section 3.5, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert "the" before "same digest". Page 5, section 4 title: change "Recommend" to "Recommended" for parallel construction with the section 3 title. Page 6, ADD block: delete the first "known". Page 6, section 6, 3rd paragraph, 5th sentence: change "signalling" to "signaling". -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
