> -----Original Message----- > From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@xxxxxxxxxxxx] > Sent: Sunday, July 19, 2020 3:26 AM > To: MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) <acm@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>; ops-dir@xxxxxxxx > Cc: last-call@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data- > channel.all@xxxxxxxx; mmusic@xxxxxxxx > Subject: RE: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data- > channel-22 > > Hi Al, > > Thank You for the review! Please see inline. > > >Reviewer: Al Morton > >Review result: Has Nits > > > >OPS-DIR review of MSRP over Data Channels > >draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21 <snip> > Nits: > > >2. Conventions > > The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALLNOT", > s/"SHALLNOT"/"SHALL NOT"/ > > This has been fixed in version -22. Maybe you were looking at version -21? [acm] Yes, when I asked for the html-ized tools version, -21 is the version that appeared, and I recorded this in the beginning of the review. I don't control the subject line or header generated by the review tool. Al > > Regards, > > Christer > > > > [0] > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dmmusic-2Dmsrp-2Dusage-2Ddata- > 2Dchannel_shepherdwriteup_&d=DwIGaQ&c=LFYZ- > o9_HUMeMTSQicvjIg&r=OfsSu8kTIltVyD1oL72cBw&m=STZGgunKZhhZfnd2hdhbpcWd2FNcD > 4TUCdc_bHAWew4&s=T_B-y_qO8-clmNexDOEiLgty5u4rN-1MJYOyXEjMdeI&e= > > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
