[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-04

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Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-04
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2020-06-06
IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is well written, and pretty much ready for publication. I
do have a couple of minor editorial comments that I'd like the authors to
address.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Q1:  Please expand DOTS on first occurence.

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Q2:  The Security Considerations say:

   "This specification does not allow to create new filtering rules,
   which is the responsibility of the DOTS data channel."

Unless I missed it, I think it would be useful to state this also earlier in
the document, e.g., in the Introduction.

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Q3: The Security Consideration say:

   "The security considerations discussed in
   [I-D.ietf-dots-signal-channel] and [I-D.ietf-dots-data-channel] need
   to be taken into account."

I think it is obvious that those security considerations need to be taken into
account. I would suggest to re-phrase, and say something like:

   "The generic security considerations for DOTS signal channels are
   defined in   [I-D.ietf-dots-signal-channel]. The generic security
   considerations for DOTS data channels are defined in
   [I-D.ietf-dots-data-channel]. This Section defines the security
   considerations that are specific to the DOTS extension defined
   in this document."



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