Re: [Last-Call] [Captive-portals] Last Call: <draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08.txt> (CAPPORT Architecture) to Informational RFC

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Hi,

Sorry, I had sent these comments sometime back, a few are still valid.

Could you please take care of these?

 

Thanks,

Subash

 

 

From: "Tirupachur Comerica, Subash" <subash.tirupachurcomerica@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Thursday, April 30, 2020 at 4:19 PM
To: "captive-portals@xxxxxxxx" <captive-portals@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-capport-architecture-07

 

Hi,

I was reviewing this AD and found a few discrepancy needing clarifications, couple of them may just be editorial in nature.

Appreciate your response on this, thanks.

 

Thanks,

Subash

 

Section 1.2

Captive Network and Captive Portal are used interchangeably, so do we define captive portal or network or both? – [Pending]

 

Section 2.3

At minimum, the API MUST provide: (1) the state of captivity and (2) a URI for the Captive Portal Server. – [Pending]

-          However, in draft-ietf-capport-api, section 5: API State Structure, only "captive" (boolean): is mandatory whereas "user-portal-url" (string): is optional. One of these two drafts may need an update for consistency.

 

Section 2.6 Component Diagram

Although the Provisioning Service, API Server, and Web Portal Server functions are shown as discrete blocks, they could of course be combined into a single element. – [Pending]

-          Here may be we can add the [Captive Portal Enforcement] as well, for eg: API Server, Web Portal Server and Enforcement can co-exist on a single WiFi Access-Point using ACLs. Also there is a feeble reference to this co-location in Section 3.4.1

 

Section 3 Captive Portal Signal

Is Enforcement Device defined anywhere else? Is it same as Captive Portal Enforcement(I guess so) Or does it coordinate with it? – [Resolved, Please ignore]

 

 

From: Captive-portals <captive-portals-bounces@xxxxxxxx> on behalf of Bob Harold <rharolde@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Monday, May 11, 2020 at 10:35 AM
To: "last-call@xxxxxxxx" <last-call@xxxxxxxx>
Cc: "capport-chairs@xxxxxxxx" <capport-chairs@xxxxxxxx>, "draft-ietf-capport-architecture@xxxxxxxx" <draft-ietf-capport-architecture@xxxxxxxx>, "captive-portals@xxxxxxxx" <captive-portals@xxxxxxxx>, IETF-Announce <ietf-announce@xxxxxxxx>, "barryleiba@xxxxxxxxx" <barryleiba@xxxxxxxxx>, Martin Thomson <mt@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: [Captive-portals] Last Call: <draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08.txt> (CAPPORT Architecture) to Informational RFC

 

I am curious why section 3.4 does not consider the MAC Address as a possible identifier?

 

-- 

Bob Harold

 

 

On Mon, May 11, 2020 at 12:56 PM The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> wrote:


The IESG has received a request from the Captive Portal Interaction WG
(capport) to consider the following document: - 'CAPPORT Architecture'
  <draft-ietf-capport-architecture-08.txt> as Informational RFC

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
last-call@xxxxxxxx mailing lists by 2020-05-25. Exceptionally, comments may
be sent to iesg@xxxxxxxx instead. In either case, please retain the beginning
of the Subject line to allow automated sorting.

Abstract


   This document describes a CAPPORT architecture.  DHCP or Router
   Advertisements, an optional signaling protocol, and an HTTP API are
   used to provide the solution.  The role of Provisioning Domains
   (PvDs) is described.




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-capport-architecture/



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