Gorry -
I've done a detailed read through this document, and it seems that there are several NiTs that were not caught during the WGLC, that should be fixed. Issues that I would like to see considered or addressed in a new revisionare below.
Many thanks. I haven't looked at it all yet, but I will let you know if I have
questions. - Sally http://www.icir.org/floyd/ (On vacation in the French countryside.)