The IESG has approved the Internet-Draft 'An Overview of Source-Specific
Multicast(SSM) Deployment' <draft-ietf-ssm-overview-05.txt> as an
Informational RFC. This document is the product of the Source-Specific
Multicast Working Group. The IESG contact persons are Bill Fenner and
Alex Zinin.
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Scott:
9 authors is kinda over the guidelines otherwise a useful document
RFC Editor Note:
Replace the author list with:
Supratik Bhattacharyya (Editor)
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Section 6.1, para 1, line 4:
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policies being proposed [20], which recommends ...
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policies being proposed [9], which recommends ...
Section 6.4, para 1, line 6:
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provided by IGMP version 3 [3] and MLD version 2 [22]. These
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provided by IGMP version 3 [3] and MLD version 2 [20]. These
Section 7, para 2, line 4:
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[20] states ...
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[9] states ...
Section 9. Acknowledgments
ADD right after the section name:
Christophe Diot, Leonard Giuliano, Rob Rockell, John Meylor,
David Meyer, Greg Shepherd, and Brian Haberman were the major
contributors to the document.
Section 10
Change section name to "Informative References"
Section 12. Author information:
Leave only info for Supratik.
Put information about others in a new section called "13. Contributors"
