Ian Hilt <ian.hilt@xxxxxxxxx> writes: > On Wed, 14 May 2008 at 11:46am -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote: > >> Ian Hilt <ian.hilt@xxxxxxxxx> writes: >> >>> git-describe: Make description more readable. >> >> Thanks, both. I think the above is meant to be on the Subject: line, and >> the text certainly is more readable. > > This is probably a stupid question, but is that all you want for > a commit message? I think the following is clear enough to describe what your patch did. commit b7893cde53eb2834deb16820eccb709d2636b81b Author: Ian Hilt <ian.hilt@xxxxxxxxx> Date: Wed May 14 14:30:55 2008 -0400 Documentation/git-describe.txt: make description more readable Signed-off-by: Ian Hilt <ian.hilt@xxxxxxxxx> Credit-to: Kevin Ballard <kevin@xxxxxx> Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> When made into a line in the shortlog, this makes it clear that it affects the documentation (and documentation only), and it describes what the patch did. If there is a guiding principle that drove the change the patch did, and that guiding principle is something other people can follow when fixing similar breakages, it often is a good idea to describe what they are in the body of the commit log message. But I did not see such a clear, reusable guiding principle for this change. What I mean by a guiding principle in this case is something like... - command description should start with a clear description of what it does, so that the readers can decide if that is the command they want to solve their problem with by reading the very first part; - and then it should describe how it does it in an unambiguous and easy to read language. Then you can have a comparison between the text before and after the change to explain why the updated text is more unambiguous. But you would risk ending up with a textbook of English composition which is not what we necessarily want to do here ;-) -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html