Hi, On Tue, 15 Apr 2008, Scott Collins wrote: > Currently, for SSH clients restricted to git-shell, CVS_SERVER should > not be changed: git-shell understands the default value of 'cvs' to mean > git-cvsserver and actually _doesn't_ understand the command > 'git-cvsserver'. How about a new paragraph here? > This makes it totally transparent to CVS users, but the > original wording here perhaps less so to the person setting-up CVS > access. Previous wording mentioning GIT_AUTHOR, GIT_COMMITTER variables > may not have made clear we really meant GIT_AUTHOR_(NAME|EMAIL), etc. Likewise here. > Add a bit of text to differentiate cvs -d (setting CVSROOT) from cvs co > -d (setting the name of the newly checked out directory). Removed an > extra 'Example:' string. > > Signed-off-by: Scott Collins <scc@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > --- > Documentation/git-cvsserver.txt | 27 +++++++++++++++------------ > 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/git-cvsserver.txt b/Documentation/git-cvsserver.txt > index 9cec802..44734e8 100644 > --- a/Documentation/git-cvsserver.txt > +++ b/Documentation/git-cvsserver.txt > @@ -106,11 +106,13 @@ Note: Newer CVS versions (>= 1.12.11) also support specifying > CVS_SERVER directly in CVSROOT like > > ------ > -cvs -d ":ext;CVS_SERVER=git-cvsserver:user@server/path/repo.git" co <HEAD_name> > +cvs -d ":ext;CVS_SERVER=git-cvsserver:user@server/path/repo.git" co <HEAD_name> -d <dir_name> I am not really sure. Normal usage AFAIAC is without -d. > ------ > This has the advantage that it will be saved in your 'CVS/Root' files and > you don't need to worry about always setting the correct environment > -variable. > +variable. SSH users restricted to git-shell don't need to override the default > +with CVS_SERVER (and probably shouldn't) as git-shell understands 'cvs' to mean > +git-cvsserver. Please make these lines shorter. > @@ -141,25 +143,26 @@ allowing access over SSH. > enabled=1 > ------ > -- > -3. On the client machine you need to set the following variables. > - CVSROOT should be set as per normal, but the directory should point at the > - appropriate git repo. For example: > +3. If you didn't specify the CVSROOT/CVS_SERVER directly in the checkout command, > + automatically saving it in your 'CVS/Root' files, then you need to set them > + explicitly in your environment. CVSROOT should be set as per normal, but the > + directory should point at the appropriate git repo. As above, for SSH clients > + _not_ restricted to git-shell, CVS_SERVER should be set to git-cvsserver. Please make the lines shorter. Also, I seem to recall that "didn't" is considered colloquial speech, while you should write "did not" in written documentation. Another thing: "CVSROOT should be set as per normal" strikes me as a little short on concrete, helpful details. Thanks, Dscho -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html