Miklos Vajna <vmiklos@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Tue, Jan 29, 2008 at 08:38:55PM +0100, Jim Meyering <jim@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> Here is an illustration, by Jon Loeliger. Both node B and C are >> -a commit parents of commit node A. Parent commits are ordered >> +commit parents of commit node A. Parent commits are ordered > > wouldn't this be "Both commit node B and C are parents of commit node A."? That does sound better. While you're word-smithing, how about s/node B/nodes B/, too: "Both commit nodes B and C are parents of commit node A." Send a patch. - To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
