From: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Correct verb tense, add missing words, avoid double blank lines,
and rephrase things that don’t read well to me like “Turn this linkage
to relative paths”.
Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
---
Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt
index d62c62dc17a..eff93be37a2 100644
--- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt
+++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt
@@ -47,15 +47,15 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
* The way AsciiDoc is used for SYNOPSIS part of the manual pages has
been revamped. The sources, at least for the simple cases, got
- vastly pleasant to work with.
+ vastly more pleasant to work with.
* The reftable library is now prepared to expect that the memory
allocation function given to it may fail to allocate and to deal
with such an error.
* An extra worktree attached to a repository points at each other to
- allow finding the repository from the worktree and vice versa
- possible. Turn this linkage to relative paths.
+ allow finding the repository from the worktree (and vice versa)
+ possible. Use relative paths for this linkage.
* Enable Windows-based CI in GitLab.
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
* Update the project's CodingGuidelines to discourage naming functions
with a "_1()" suffix.
- * Updates the '.clang-format' to match project conventions.
+ * Update '.clang-format' to match project conventions.
* Centralize documentation for repository extensions into a single place.
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
* The migration procedure between two ref backends has been optimized.
* "git fsck" learned to issue warnings on "curiously formatted" ref
- contents that have always been taken valid but something Git
+ contents that have always been treated as valid but that Git
wouldn't have written itself (e.g., missing terminating end-of-line
after the full object name).
@@ -127,13 +127,13 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
* Drop support for ancient environments in various CI jobs.
- * Isolates the reftable subsystem from the rest of Git's codebase by
+ * Isolate the reftable subsystem from the rest of Git's codebase by
using fewer pieces of Git's infrastructure.
* Optimize reading random references out of the reftable backend by
allowing reuse of iterator objects.
- * Backport oss-fuzz tests for us to our codebase.
+ * Backport oss-fuzz tests to our codebase.
* Introduce a new repository extension to prevent older Git versions
from mis-interpreting worktrees created with relative paths.
@@ -173,13 +173,13 @@ Fixes since v2.47
-----------------
* Doc update to clarify how periodical maintenance are scheduled,
- spread across time to avoid thundering hurds.
+ spread across time to avoid thundering herds.
* Use after free and double freeing at the end in "git log -L... -p"
had been identified and fixed.
* On macOS, fsmonitor can fall into a race condition that results in
- a client waiting forever to be notified for an event that have
+ a client waiting forever to be notified about an event that has
already happened. This problem has been corrected.
* "git maintenance start" crashed due to an uninitialized variable
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Fixes since v2.47
* The dumb-http code regressed when the result of re-indexing a pack
yielded an *.idx file that differs in content from the *.idx file
it downloaded from the remote. This has been corrected by no longer
- relying on: the *.idx file we got from the remote.
+ relying on the *.idx file we got from the remote.
* When called with '--left-right' and '--use-bitmap-index', 'rev-list'
will produce output without any left/right markers, which has been
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ Fixes since v2.47
* "git gc" discards any objects that are outside promisor packs that
are referred to by an object in a promisor pack, and we do not
refetch them from the promisor at runtime, resulting an unusable
- repository. Work it around by including these objects in the
+ repository. Work around it by including these objects in the
referring promisor pack at the receiving end of the fetch.
* Avoid build/test breakage on a system without working malloc debug
@@ -282,9 +282,8 @@ Fixes since v2.47
on the path, which was not documented, which has been corrected.
(merge bc1a980759 kk/doc-ancestry-path later to maint).
-
* "git tag" has been taught to refuse to create refs/tags/HEAD
- as such a tag will be confusing in the context of UI provided by
+ since such a tag will be confusing in the context of the UI provided by
the Git Porcelain commands.
(merge bbd445d5ef jc/forbid-head-as-tagname later to maint).
base-commit: b74ff38af58464688b211140b90ec90598d340c6
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2.48.0.rc2
