Point the user towards the ref/branch name syntax rules if they give an invalid name. Also make some spatially-appropriate improvements: • Test style • `advice.txt` § git-replace(1) (see cover letter for v2) § Alternatives (to this change) While working on this I also thought that it might be nice to have a man page `gitrefsyntax`. That one could use a lot of the content from `man git check-ref-format` verbatim. Then the hint could point towards that man page. And it seems that AsciiDoc supports _includes_ which means that the rules don’t have to be duplicated between the two man pages. § CC For changes to `advice.txt`: Cc: Elijah Newren <newren@xxxxxxxxx> Cc: Jean-Noël Avila <avila.jn@xxxxxxxxx> § Changes in v4 Mostly about the style rewrite in `advice.txt`. • Patch 1: • Drop `(setup)` change • Drop superflouos bullet point • Don’t use period to end bullet point • Patch 2: • Drop trailer since this took on a life of its own • Drop uses of colons and semicolons in favor of a “to <verb>” clause (mostly “to tell”) • Simplify some of the “effect clauses” by using “to tell” instead of verbs like “instruct” • Patch 3: • Also quote ref globs • Patch 5: • Update refSyntax entry for consistency with the rest of the entries Kristoffer Haugsbakk (5): t3200: improve test style advice: make all entries stylistically consistent advice: use backticks for verbatim advice: use double quotes for regular quoting branch: advise about ref syntax rules Documentation/config/advice.txt | 95 ++++++++++++------------ advice.c | 1 + advice.h | 1 + branch.c | 8 ++- builtin/branch.c | 8 ++- t/t3200-branch.sh | 123 +++++++++++++++++--------------- 6 files changed, 128 insertions(+), 108 deletions(-) Range-diff against v3: 1: e6a2628ce57 ! 1: ad101c72a60 t3200: improve test style @@ Commit message Also: • Remove a now-irrelevant comment about test placement and switch back - to `main` post-test. + to `main` post-test • Prefer indented literal heredocs (`-\EOF`) except for a block which says that this is intentional - • Move a `git config` command into the test and mark it as `setup` since - the next test depends on it Helped-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> + + ## Notes (series) ## + v4: + • Drop `(setup)` change + • Drop superflouos bullet point + • Don’t use period to end bullet point + ## t/t3200-branch.sh ## @@ t/t3200-branch.sh: test_expect_success 'git branch HEAD should fail' ' test_must_fail git branch HEAD @@ t/t3200-branch.sh: test_expect_success 'git branch -v with column.ui ignored' ' - -git config branch.s/s.dummy Hello - --test_expect_success 'git branch -m s/s s should work when s/t is deleted' ' -+test_expect_success '(setup) git branch -m s/s s should work when s/t is deleted' ' + test_expect_success 'git branch -m s/s s should work when s/t is deleted' ' + git config branch.s/s.dummy Hello && git branch --create-reflog s/s && git reflog exists refs/heads/s/s && 2: d48b4719c27 ! 2: 7017ff3fff7 advice: make all entries stylistically consistent @@ Metadata ## Commit message ## advice: make all entries stylistically consistent + In general, rewrite entries to the following form: + + 1. Clause or sentence describing when the advice is shown + 2. Optional “to <verb>” clause which says what the advice is + about (e.g. for resetNoRefresh: tell the user that they can use + `--no-refresh`) + + Concretely: + 1. Use “shown” instead of “advice shown” • “advice” is implied and a bit repetitive 2. Use “when” instead of “if” 3. Lead with “Shown when” and end the entry with the effect it has, where applicable 4. Use “the user” instead of “a user” or “you” - 5. detachedHead: connect clause with a semicolon to make the sentence - flow better in this new context - 6. implicitIdentity: rewrite description in order to lead with *when* + 5. implicitIdentity: rewrite description in order to lead with *when* the advice is shown (see point (3)) - 7. Prefer the present tense (with the exception of pushNonFFMatching) - 8. Use a colon to connect the last clause instead of a comma - 9. waitingForEditor: give example of relevance in this new context - 10. pushUpdateRejected: exception to the above principles + 6. Prefer the present tense (with the exception of pushNonFFMatching) + 7. waitingForEditor: give example of relevance in this new context + 8. pushUpdateRejected: exception to the above principles - Suggested-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> ## Notes (series) ## - Maybe the style that we eventually agree on should be documented outside the - commit log? + v4: + • Drop trailer since this took on a life of its own + • Drop uses of colons and semicolons in favor of a “to <verb>” + clause (mostly “to tell”) + • Simplify some of the “effect clauses” by using “to tell” instead of + verbs like “instruct” + v3: + • Comment: Maybe the style that we eventually agree on should be + documented outside the commit log? ## Documentation/config/advice.txt ## @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: - Advice that shows the location of the patch file when - linkgit:git-am[1] fails to apply it. + Shown when linkgit:git-am[1] fails to apply a patch -+ file: tell the location of the file. ++ file, to tell the user the location of the file. ambiguousFetchRefspec:: - Advice shown when a fetch refspec for multiple remotes maps to + Shown when a fetch refspec for multiple remotes maps to @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: + Shown when the user uses linkgit:git-switch[1] or linkgit:git-checkout[1] - to move to the detached HEAD state, to instruct how to -+ to move to the detached HEAD state; instruct how to - create a local branch after the fact. +- create a local branch after the fact. ++ to move to the detached HEAD state, to tell the user how ++ to create a local branch after the fact. diverging:: - Advice shown when a fast-forward is not possible. + Shown when a fast-forward is not possible. @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: - your information is guessed from the system username and - domain name. + Shown when the user's information is guessed from the -+ system username and domain name: tell the user how to ++ system username and domain name, to tell the user how to + set their identity configuration. nestedTag:: - Advice shown if a user attempts to recursively tag a tag object. @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: - linkgit:git-reset[1] when the command takes more than 2 seconds - to refresh the index after reset. + Shown when linkgit:git-reset[1] takes more than 2 -+ seconds to refresh the index after reset: tell the user ++ seconds to refresh the index after reset, to tell the user + that they can use the `--no-refresh` option. resolveConflict:: - Advice shown by various commands when conflicts @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: rmHints:: - In case of failure in the output of linkgit:git-rm[1], - show directions on how to proceed from the current state. -+ Shown on failure in the output of linkgit:git-rm[1]: ++ Shown on failure in the output of linkgit:git-rm[1], to + give directions on how to proceed from the current state. sequencerInUse:: - Advice shown when a sequencer command is already in progress. @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: - when the command takes more than 2 seconds to enumerate untracked - files. + Shown when linkgit:git-status[1] takes more than 2 -+ seconds to enumerate untracked files: consider using the -+ `-u` option. ++ seconds to enumerate untracked files, to tell the user that ++ they can use the `-u` option. submoduleAlternateErrorStrategyDie:: - Advice shown when a submodule.alternateErrorStrategy option + Shown when a submodule.alternateErrorStrategy option @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: - Advice shown when a user tries to create a worktree from an - invalid reference, to instruct how to create a new unborn + Shown when the user tries to create a worktree from an -+ invalid reference: instruct how to create a new unborn ++ invalid reference, to tell the user how to create a new unborn branch instead. -- 3: 30d662a04c7 ! 3: df9b872afd1 advice: use backticks for code @@ Metadata Author: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> ## Commit message ## - advice: use backticks for code + advice: use backticks for verbatim - Use backticks for quoting code rather than single quotes. + Use backticks for inline-verbatim rather than single quotes. Also quote + the unquoted ref globs. Also replace “the add command” with “`git add`”. Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> + + ## Notes (series) ## + v4: + • Also quote ref globs + ## Documentation/config/advice.txt ## @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: These variables control various optional help messages designed to @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: it resulted in a non-fast-forward error. pushRefNeedsUpdate:: @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: - refs/heads/* or refs/tags/* based on the type of the + guess based on the source and destination refs what + remote ref namespace the source belongs in, but where + we can still suggest that the user push to either +- refs/heads/* or refs/tags/* based on the type of the ++ `refs/heads/*` or `refs/tags/*` based on the type of the source object. pushUpdateRejected:: - Set this variable to 'false' if you want to disable 4: 3028713357f = 4: 15594b2a3a8 advice: use double quotes for regular quoting 5: 402b7937951 ! 5: 97b53c04894 branch: advise about ref syntax rules @@ Commit message ## Notes (series) ## + v4: + • Update refSyntax entry for consistency with the rest of the entries v3: • Tweak advice doc for the new entry • Better test style @@ Documentation/config/advice.txt: advice.*:: `pushFetchFirst`, `pushNeedsForce`, and `pushRefNeedsUpdate` simultaneously. + refSyntax:: -+ Shown when the user provides an illegal ref name: point -+ towards the ref syntax documentation. ++ Shown when the user provides an illegal ref name, to ++ tell the user about the ref syntax documentation. resetNoRefresh:: Shown when linkgit:git-reset[1] takes more than 2 - seconds to refresh the index after reset: tell the user + seconds to refresh the index after reset, to tell the user ## advice.c ## @@ advice.c: static struct { -- 2.44.0.64.g52b67adbeb2