It turns out that AI is pretty good at making small fixes to documentation; certainly not perfect, but it provides quite good signal. Unfortunately, there is a lot to sift through. Some points about my strategy: * I ignored a few categories of things like British vs. American spellings (though being consistent on that might be a nice change) * I dropped many changes where I thought there wasn't an issue being corrected but just a switch of style being suggested (though I accepted a number of these types of changes before later deciding to drop them). * I also started discarding lower priority changes like comma placement. I accepted a number of these that I thought made the documentation clearer, but I eventually just started dropping them as I had spent far more hours than I expected on this series. * A few of the changes AI suggested were bad (it really shouldn't mess with protocol and RFC-like text). Definitely was useful to review. * Occasionally I noticed an even better improvement and tweaked the text accordingly. I did review every single change here, multiple times, and I have tried to split up this series in a way to make it easier to review. In particular I: * dropped any changes that conflicted with anything in next or seen. I may resubmit some of those later. * split it into a bunch of patches based on various grammatical rules being corrected * sometimes when a single line had multiple types of changes, I split the fixes across multiple patches in order to group types of changes * sometimes splitting the single-line changes seemed like too much, and I just combined the multiple changes to a single line with the first patch in the series, "wording improvements". Let me know if there are other changes that would make this easier to review. In a sense, though, it's already had multiple eyes looking at this, it's just that one pair of those eyes were artificial. :-) (Note: every patch in this series, except for the whitespace fixes patch, are best viewed with --color-words.) Elijah Newren (25): documentation: wording improvements documentation: fix small error documentation: fix typos documentation: fix apostrophe usage documentation: add missing words documentation: remove extraneous words documentation: fix subject/verb agreement documentation: employ consistent verb tense for a list documentation: fix verb tense documentation: fix adjective vs. noun documentation: fix verb vs. noun documentation: fix singular vs. plural documentation: whitespace is already generally plural documentation: fix choice of article documentation: add missing article documentation: remove unnecessary hyphens documentation: add missing hyphens documentation: use clearer prepositions documentation: fix punctuation documentation: fix capitalization documentation: fix whitespace issues documentation: add some commas where they are helpful documentation: add missing fullstops documentation: add missing quotes documentation: add missing parenthesis Documentation/CodingGuidelines | 6 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