On 2023-09-07 10:32, Christian Couder wrote:
On Thu, Jun 22, 2023 at 12:03 PM Toon Claes <toon@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Christian Couder <christian.couder@xxxxxxxxx> writes:
> +DESCRIPTION
> +-----------
> +
> +Takes a range of commits, and replays them onto a new location. Does
> +not touch the working tree or index, and does not update any
> +references. However, the output of this command is meant to be used
Small suggestion here:
Takes a range of commits, and replays them onto a new location. Does
neither touch the working tree nor index, and does not update any
references.
I am not a native speaker, so I am not sure what's best here. I find
your suggestion a bit less clear though, so until a native speaker
agrees with it or maybe finds something even better, I prefer to leave
it as-is.
I'm also not a native English speaker, but I spent about 2.5 years
contributing a whole lot to English Wikipedia, so I'd dare to say I've
honed my English skills rather well. Thus, here's my take on this:
Takes a range of commits and replays them onto a new location.
Leaves the working tree and the index untouched, and updates no
references. The output of this command is to be used...
This is written in a concise yet slightly imperative way, which should
be suitable for the purpose. I hope you agree.
