Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.email> writes: >> But I do not object to being more explicit. > > The core point though was that it can be misunderstood, thus avoiding > the indirection, as you say, makes it more explicit for the reader. Yup. FWIW, I was saying that what the author wrote was not _wrong_ per-se. I agree that being explicit here (instead of hiding behind a pronoun) is an improvement. Thanks.
