Derrick Stolee <derrickstolee@xxxxxxxxxx> writes: > Definitely room for improvement here. I got hung up on the two uses of > "it" so here is another attempt: > > If its `filter` member is not `NULL`, then `filter` contains > information for how to filter the object list. > > What do you think? Sure. I won't get hung up on three uses of filter here ;-) The above reads well. Thanks.