Re: [PATCH 06/11] MyFirstObjectWalk: update recommended usage

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Derrick Stolee <derrickstolee@xxxxxxxxxx> writes:

> Definitely room for improvement here. I got hung up on the two uses of
> "it" so here is another attempt:
>
>  If its `filter` member is not `NULL`, then `filter` contains
>  information for how to filter the object list.
>
> What do you think?

Sure.  I won't get hung up on three uses of filter here ;-)

The above reads well.

Thanks.



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