On Sat, Oct 23, 2021 at 5:13 PM Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Eric Sunshine <sunshine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes: > >> +-<digit>:: > >> + Regulate compression level using the specified <digit>. Higher > >> + values enables smaller size at the expense of slower time. > > > > s/enables/enable/ > > > > A couple notes: > > > > "slower time" is an unusual way to convey the concept; perhaps say it > > takes "more time". > > [...] > >> + Supported values are from `-0` (store-only) to `-9` (best ratio). > >> + Default is `-6` if isn't specified. > > > > s/if isn't/if it isn't/ > > ...or... > > s/if isn't/if not/ > > Sounds all sensible. > > In summary, perhaps something like this? I still have "-9 (best > ratio)" which does not say it is merely the intent and not > guarantee, but the resulting text read a bit funny with "best ratio" > replaced with "try hardest". This version looks fine. Thanks.
