Add an "and" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the paragraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the second sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph. Further down in the file, add the missing "be" in "must be accompanied". Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren <martin.agren@xxxxxxxxx> --- Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt index ac0d003835..50ea8c82ca 100644 --- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt +++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt @@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ using the `--thin` option to linkgit:git-pack-objects[1], and unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1]. There is no option to create a "thick pack" when using revision -exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By -using "thin packs" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in +exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By +using "thin packs", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in size. That they're "thin" under the hood is merely noted here as a -curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation +curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation. See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format` documentation] for more details and the discussion of "thin pack" in @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ unbundle <file>:: SPECIFYING REFERENCES --------------------- -Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a +Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a bundle. More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can -- 2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002
