On Mon, Sep 20, 2021 at 10:22 PM Glen Choo <chooglen@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > In the "Sending v2" section, readers are directed to create v2 patches > without using --range-diff. However, it is customary to include a > range-diff against the v1 patches as a reviewer aid. > > Update the "Sending v2" section to suggest a simple workflow that uses > the --range-diff option. Also include some explanation for -v2 and > --range-diff to help the reader understand the importance. > > Signed-off-by: Glen Choo <chooglen@xxxxxxxxxx> > --- > diff --git a/Documentation/MyFirstContribution.txt b/Documentation/MyFirstContribution.txt > @@ -1029,22 +1029,41 @@ kidding - be patient!) > +Make your changes with `git rebase -i`. Once you're ready with the next > +iteration of your patch, the process is fairly similar to before. Generate your > +patches again, but with some new flags: I wonder if "Make your changes with `git rebase -i`" is a bit too terse for newcomers to understand. Perhaps a bit more verbose: Refine your patch series by using `git rebase -i` to adjust commits based upon reviewer comments. Once the patch series is ready for submission, generate your patches again, but with some new flags: > ---- > +$ git format-patch -v2 --cover-letter -o psuh/ --range-diff master..psuh-v1 master.. > ---- > > +The `--range-diff master..psuh-v1` parameter tells `format-patch` to include a > +range-diff between `psuh-v1` and `psuh` (see linkgit:git-range-diff[1]). This > +helps tell reviewers about the differences between your v1 and v2 patches. This leaves dangling the question of where the range-diff is placed. Maybe say: ... tells `format-patch` to include a range-diff between ... in the cover letter. > +The `-v2` parameter tells `format-patch` to output "v2" patches. For instance, > +you may notice that your v2 patches, are all named like > +`v2-000n-my-commit-subject.patch`. `-v2` will also format your patches by > +prefixing them with "[PATCH V2]" instead of "[PATCH]", and your range-diff will > +be prefaced with "Range-diff against v1". s/V2/v2/ > +Afer you run this command, `format-patch` will output the patches to the `psuh/` > +directory, alongside the v1 patches. Using a single directory makes it easy to > +refer to the old v1 patches while proofreading the v2 patches, but you will need > +to be careful to send out only the v2 patches. We will use a pattern like > +"psuh/v2-*.patch" ("psuh/*.patch" would match v1 and v2 patches). To avoid any sort of confusion, perhaps: ... "psuh/v2-*.patch" (not "psuh/*.patch" which would match v1 and v2 patches)