Hi Eric, On Fri, 3 Sep 2021, Eric Sunshine wrote: > On Fri, Sep 3, 2021 at 11:23 AM Johannes Schindelin > <Johannes.Schindelin@xxxxxx> wrote: > > On Tue, 31 Aug 2021, Eric Sunshine wrote: > > > On Mon, Aug 30, 2021 at 5:35 PM Johannes Schindelin via GitGitGadget > > > > +With the `--all` option, all enlistments currently registered with Scalar > > > > +will be reconfigured. This option is meant to to be run every time Scalar > > > > +was upgraded. > > > > > > s/was/is/ > > > > I wanted to convey a temporal order, so I changed it to "every time after > > Scalar is upgraded". Okay? > > I think I understood the intent of the original, but it causes a > grammatical hiccup. Your revised version can work, although I might > write it this way: > > This option is meant to be run each time Scalar is upgraded. > > However, perhaps that is too ambiguous and some users may think that > the process of upgrading Scalar will automatically run this command, > and you'd like to make it clear that it is the user's responsibility. > So, perhaps: > > Use this option after each Scalar upgrade. > > or something. I like the last one best, too. Thank you, Dscho
