On Fri, Jul 16 2021, Junio C Hamano wrote: > Technical writing seeks to convey information with minimal > friction. One way that a reader can experience friction is if they > encounter a description of "a user" that is later simplified using a > gendered pronoun. If the reader does not consider that pronoun to > apply to them, then they can experience cognitive dissonance that > removes focus from the information. > > Give some basic tips to guide us avoid unnecessary uses of gendered > description. > > Using a gendered pronoun is appropriate when referring to a specific > person. > > There are acceptable existing uses of gendered pronouns within the > Git codebase, such as: > > * References to real people (e.g. Linus Torvalds, "the Git maintainer"). > Do not misgender real people. If there is any doubt to the gender of a > person, then avoid using pronouns. > > * References to fictional people with clear genders (e.g. Alice and > Bob). > > * Sample text used in test cases (e.g t3702, t6432). > > * The official text of the GPL license contains uses of "he or she", > but using singular "they" (or modifying the text in some other > way) is not within the scope of the Git project. > > * Literal email messages in Documentation/howto/ should not be edited > for grammatical concerns such as this, unless we update the entire > document to fit the standard documentation format. If such an effort is > taken on, then the authorship would change and no longer refer to the > exact mail message. > > * External projects consumed in contrib/ should not deviate solely for > style reasons. Recommended edits should be contributed to those > projects directly. > > Other cases within the Git project were cleaned up by the previous > changes. > > Co-authored-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> > Signed-off-by: Derrick Stolee <dstolee@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> On the topic of co-authors & SOB this text does look quite familiar: https://lore.kernel.org/git/87a6nz2fda.fsf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/ :) > The only change relative to the previous one is that this > explicitly calls out that some are taught that 'they' is only used > for third-person plural. As we already say that some foreigners > find it ungrammatical and unnatural to use 'they', I actually do > not think it is necessary[...] The proposed commit message... > + In order to ensure the documentation is inclusive, avoid assuming > + that an unspecified example person is male or female, and think > + twice before using "he", "him", "she", or "her". Here are some > + tips to avoid use of gendered pronouns: Applies to this: > + - Prefer succinctness and matter-of-factly describing functionality > + in the abstract. E.g. > + > + --short:: Emit output in the short-format. > + > + and avoid something like these overly verbose alternatives: > + > + --short:: Use this to emit output in the short-format. > + --short:: You can use this to get output in the short-format. > + --short:: A user who prefers shorter output could.... > + --short:: Should a person and/or program want shorter output, he > + she/they/it can... But this. > + This practice often eliminates the need to involve human actors in > + your description, but it is a good practice regardless of the > + avoidance of gendered pronouns. Not this. > + - When it becomes awkward to stick to this style, prefer "you" when > + addressing the the hypothetical user, and possibly "we" when > + discussing how the program might react to the user. E.g. > + > + You can use this option instead of --xyz, but we might remove > + support for it in future versions. > + > + while keeping in mind that you can probably be less verbose, e.g. > + > + Use this instead of --xyz. This option might be removed in future > + versions. But this. > + - If you still need to refer to an example person that is > + third-person singular, you may resort to "singular they" to avoid > + "he/she/him/her", e.g. > + > + A contributor asks their upstream to pull from them. > + > + Note that this sounds ungrammatical and unnatural to those who > + learned that "they" is only used for third-person plural, e.g. > + those who learn English as a second language in some parts of the > + world. > + And not this, have, respectively, nothing to do and mostly everything to do with the commit message. IOW I don't think we should conflate a section on general style in our common patterns/issues in our docs and one that at the end state of this series is discussing the already-rare-now-nonexistent pattern that the proposed policy is trying to prevent ever making it in-tree again, or to put the entirety of a general style guide under the equivalent of "how to avoid gendered pronouns". IOW to have this instead (this is mostly a mere moving of your proposed version): == BEGIN== General style points for our documentation - Prefer succinctness and matter-of-factly describing functionality in the abstract. E.g. --short:: Emit output in the short-format. and avoid something like these overly verbose alternatives: --short:: Use this to emit output in the short-format. --short:: You can use this to get output in the short-format. --short:: A user who prefers shorter output could.... --short:: Should a person and/or program want shorter output, he she/they/it can... - When it becomes awkward to stick to this style, prefer "you" when addressing the the hypothetical user, and possibly "we" when discussing how the program might react to the user. E.g. You can use this option instead of --xyz, but we might remove support for it in future versions. while keeping in mind that you can probably be less verbose, e.g. Use this instead of --xyz. This option might be removed in future versions. Discussing beings in our documentation: In order to ensure the documentation is inclusive, avoid assuming that an unspecified example person is male or female, and think twice before using "he", "him", "she", or "her". Here are some tips to avoid use of gendered pronouns: The practice of avoiding verbosity discussed above often eliminates the need to involve human actors in your description. - If you still need to refer to an example person that is third-person singular, you may resort to "singular they" to avoid "he/she/him/her", e.g. A contributor asks their upstream to pull from them. Note that this sounds ungrammatical and unnatural to those who learned that "they" is only used for third-person plural, e.g. those who learn English as a second language in some parts of the world. == END == I'd be happy to re-arrange this, if I could only get the submitter of the series to respond to my E-Mails... Snipping around above: > , but I'd prefer not to leave easy loose > end hanging untied, so let's close this round and let others polish > on top if they wanted to after the dust settls. Sure, but as someone who'll probably want to patch the first part of this at one point or another, it's going to be rather weird to cover e.g. how we prefer to quote options or refer to things in errors/warnings or whatever all under a section that says all of the below is in the service of the avoidance of gender pronouns. Whereas it's mostly the case that our docs are just following a style established in common OS-level docs at a time when I daresay this topic wasn't part of the zeitgeist.
