[PATCH 2/6] user-manual: minor editing for conciseness

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From: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

Just cutting out a few unnecessary words.

Signed-off-by: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
---
 Documentation/user-manual.txt |   10 +++-------
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 0331bad..933177a 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -42,10 +42,9 @@ How to get a git repository
 It will be useful to have a git repository to experiment with as you
 read this manual.
 
-The best way to get one is by using the gitlink:git-clone[1] command
-to download a copy of an existing repository for a project that you
-are interested in.  If you don't already have a project in mind, here
-are some interesting examples:
+The best way to get one is by using the gitlink:git-clone[1] command to
+download a copy of an existing repository.  If you don't already have a
+project in mind, here are some interesting examples:
 
 ------------------------------------------------
 	# git itself (approx. 10MB download):
@@ -63,9 +62,6 @@ directory, you will see that it contains a copy of the project files,
 together with a special top-level directory named ".git", which
 contains all the information about the history of the project.
 
-In most of the following, examples will be taken from one of the two
-repositories above.
-
 [[how-to-check-out]]
 How to check out a different version of a project
 -------------------------------------------------
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1.5.3.rc5.19.g0734d

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