On Mon, Aug 3, 2020 at 1:57 PM Martin Ågren <martin.agren@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > I offer the following suggestions on top. If you agree with them, or > some of them, you might want to squash them into the various patches. Thanks for the review and suggestions for additional changes. See a few minor comments below... > -"linked working tree" as opposed to the "main working tree" prepared by "git > -init" or "git clone". A repository has one main working tree (if it's not a > +"linked working tree" as opposed to the "main working tree" prepared by linkgit:git-init[1] > +or linkgit:git-clone[1]. A repository has one main working tree (if it's not a Good idea, though this could just go atop this series. > -directory specific files such as HEAD, index, etc. As a convenience, > +directory specific files such as `HEAD`, `index`, etc. As a convenience, I intentionally left HEAD as-is because it consistently lacks quotes in this document, and I didn't feel strongly about it being quoted or not. Such a change could easily go atop this series. I did see and consider adding backticks around "index" here but likewise didn't feel strongly about it at the time. But upon reconsideration, as a literal filename, you're right that it ought to be typeset specially. > @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ This can also be set up as the default behaviour by using the > - "--track" in linkgit:git-branch[1] for details. > + `--track` in linkgit:git-branch[1] for details. I missed this one. > - With 'add', suppress feedback messages. > + With `add`, suppress feedback messages. And this. > - With `prune`, only expire unused working trees older than <time>. > + With `prune`, only expire unused working trees older than `<time>`. Ditto. > -on "worktreeConfig" extension, e.g.: > +on the "worktreeConfig" extension, e.g.: In addition to the grammo you spotted, the quotes around worktreeConfig should be backticks. I'll think go ahead and re-roll, adding a couple new patches, respectively, for the linkgit:'s you pointed out and typesetting `HEAD` specially.