On Mon, Apr 20, 2020 at 06:20:00PM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote: > > Emily Shaffer <emilyshaffer@xxxxxxxxxx> writes: > > > Whoops, just realized this doesn't match the proposal below. Wrote these > > on different days :) > > It often is a good idea to attempt writing anything in one sitting > for coherency, and proofread the result on a separate day before > sending it out ;-) Agreed for next time :) I didn't make it very clear in my initial comment that the only problem here is the code snippets and the difference is very minor - I don't think it's worth a reroll on its own without hearing feedback about the rest. Or, to put it another way, if any interested reader said "I'll wait to review" - don't ;) - Emily
