"brian m. carlson" <sandals@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes: > I'm fine with or without this change. I think the original is clear to > a native English speaker, but if we think it will be easier to parse or > harder to misread with "made", then I'm in favor of the change. I, of > course, cannot speak for how either one reads to a non-native speaker. I am not a native, but if I were writing it I would probably have written without the "made", so I guess I am in slight favor of not changing this part. > I'm not sure it's fair to categorize it as a "grammatical mistake", > though. The patch certainly is an attempt to make the text better, but I agree that the patch does not correct any "mistake". Thanks.