On Wed, 25 Mar 2020 at 12:03, brian m. carlson <sandals@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > On 2020-03-25 at 06:23:49, Martin Ågren wrote: > > On Wed, 25 Mar 2020 at 02:37, brian m. carlson > > I read this as: > > > > How do I prevent users from making "certain changes with hooks"? > > > > As opposed to your intended meaning: > > > > How do I (with hooks) prevent users from making certain changes? > > > > I'm not suggesting the latter as a "fix" for this "problem" though, > > since it's a bit clumsy. How about adding a comma: > > > > How do I prevent users from making certain changes, with hooks? > > > > Or maybe just dropping those last two words. > > > > Please trust your judgement on whether this is a problem, and if so, how > > to go about addressing it -- I know you have lots of such judgement. > > How about, "How do I use hooks to prevent users from making certain > changes?" That seems to both read smoothly and avoid the misplaced > modifier. Very nice. Martin
