On Mon, Aug 19, 2019 at 01:09:04PM -0400, Eric Sunshine wrote: > On Sun, Aug 18, 2019 at 10:37 PM Denton Liu <liu.denton@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > In git-format-patch.txt, we were missing some key user information. > > First of all, using the `--to` and `--cc` options don't override > > `format.to` and `format.cc` variables, respectively. They add on to each > > other. Document this. > > > > In addition, document the special value of `--base=auto`. > > > > Next, while we're at it, surround option arguments with <>. > > > > Finally, document the `format.outputDirectory` config and change > > `format.coverletter` to use camelcase. > > I can't figure out if you typeset "camelcase" like that intentionally, > as opposed to "camelCase" or "camel case" or "camel-case". I thought that was how it's spelled but a quick Google search proves me wrong. > > > Signed-off-by: Denton Liu <liu.denton@xxxxxxxxx> > > --- > > diff --git a/Documentation/git-format-patch.txt b/Documentation/git-format-patch.txt > > --to=<email>:: > > Add a `To:` header to the email headers. This is in addition > > - to any configured headers, and may be used multiple times. > > + to any configured headers, and may be used multiple times. The > > + emails given will be used along with any emails given by > > + `format.to` configurations. > > Hmph. This seems redundant. The description already says "This is in > addition to...", so a new sentence saying "...used along with..." is > just parroting what was already stated. > > > The negated form `--no-to` discards all `To:` headers added so > > far (from config or command line). > > @@ -314,7 +318,8 @@ you can use `--suffix=-patch` to get `0001-description-of-my-change-patch`. > > --base=<commit>:: > > Record the base tree information to identify the state the > > patch series applies to. See the BASE TREE INFORMATION section > > - below for details. > > + below for details. If <commit> is equal to "auto", a base commit > > + is automatically chosen. > > "is equal to" is unnecessarily technical-sounding. How about: > > If <commit> is "auto", ...