- "last-resort" is two words, not a conjoined word, it doesn't require the hyphen - "method of" is vulgar, "method for" is nicer - "recovery" becomes "recovering" from Steve Hoelzer's original version of this patch - "if you want" is nicer as "if you wish" - "you may" should be "you can"; "you may" is "you have permission to" rather than "you can"'s "it is possible to" Signed-off-by: Andy Parkins <andyparkins@xxxxxxxxx> --- My apologies for jumping on your patch, but when I read the context of your change, I couldn't resist fixing some things around it too. Documentation/user-manual.txt | 6 +++--- 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt index 7eaafa8..d62ccd0 100644 --- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt +++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt @@ -1527,9 +1527,9 @@ dangling tree b24c2473f1fd3d91352a624795be026d64c8841f ------------------------------------------------- Dangling objects are not a problem. At worst they may take up a little -extra disk space. They can sometimes provide a last-resort method of -recovery lost work--see <<dangling-objects>> for details. However, if -you want, you may remove them with gitlink:git-prune[1] or the --prune +extra disk space. They can sometimes provide a last resort method for +recovering lost work--see <<dangling-objects>> for details. However, if +you wish, you can remove them with gitlink:git-prune[1] or the --prune option to gitlink:git-gc[1]: ------------------------------------------------- -- 1.5.2.1.134.gd166e - To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
