On Sat, Jan 6, 2018 at 10:46 AM, Kaartic Sivaraam <kaartic.sivaraam@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Signed-off-by: Kaartic Sivaraam <kaartic.sivaraam@xxxxxxxxx> > --- > Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt | 19 ++++++++++--------- > 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt b/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt > index 745a3838e..339fb73db 100644 > --- a/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt > +++ b/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt > @@ -76,9 +76,10 @@ The configuration of submodules > Submodule operations can be configured using the following mechanisms > (from highest to lowest precedence): > > - * The command line for those commands that support taking submodule > - specifications. Most commands have a boolean flag '--recurse-submodules > - whether to recurse into submodules. Examples are `ls-files` or `checkout`. > + * The command line arguments of those commands that support taking submodule > + specifications. Most commands have a boolean flag '--recurse-submodules' > + which specify whether they should recurse into submodules. Examples are > + `ls-files` or `checkout`. > Some commands take enums, such as `fetch` and `push`, where you can > specify how submodules are affected. > > @@ -90,8 +91,8 @@ Submodule operations can be configured using the following mechanisms > For example an effect from the submodule's `.gitignore` file > would be observed when you run `git status --ignore-submodules=none` in > the superproject. This collects information from the submodule's working > -directory by running `status` in the submodule, which does pay attention > -to its `.gitignore` file. > +directory by running `status` in the submodule while paying attention > +to the `.gitignore` file of the submodule. Both are grammatically correct and expressive, thanks! > + Extra spurious line? > The submodule's `$GIT_DIR/config` file would come into play when running > `git push --recurse-submodules=check` in the superproject, as this would > @@ -107,13 +108,13 @@ If the submodule is not yet initialized, then the configuration > inside the submodule does not exist yet, so configuration where to > obtain the submodule from is configured here for example. > > - * the `.gitmodules` file inside the superproject. Additionally to the > - required mapping between submodule's name and path, a project usually > + * The `.gitmodules` file inside the superproject. Additionally, if mapping > + is required between a submodule's name and its path, a project usually This changes meaning, originally it tries to say: * it requires mapping path <-> names. * but there can be more. whereas the new lines are: * mapping is optional * there can be more. > uses this file to suggest defaults for the upstream collection > of repositories. > + > -This file mainly serves as the mapping between name and path in > -the superproject, such that the submodule's Git directory can be > +This file mainly serves as the mapping between the name and path of submodules > +in the superproject, such that the submodule's Git directory can be > located. makes sense! Thanks, Stefan > + > If the submodule has never been initialized, this is the only place > -- > 2.16.0.rc0.223.g4a4ac8367 >