On Sun, 2017-11-19 at 12:42 -0500, Robert P. J. Day wrote: > On Sun, 19 Nov 2017, Christoph Michelbach wrote: > > > > > On Fri, 2017-11-17 at 12:24 +0900, Junio C Hamano wrote: > > > > > > So an updated suggestion for the text would be: > > > > > > This hook is invoked by 'git-receive-pack' on the remote repository, > > > which happens when a 'git push' is done on a local repository. > > > > > > Oh, wait. That is what we already have ;-). > > But this text suggests that the hook is always invoked when a git > > push to that repo is done, which is not the case. How about adding > > "and updates are reference in the remote repository"? > "referenced"? > > rday > Sorry, meant to write "a" instead of "are".