On Fri, 10 Nov 2017, Eric Sunshine wrote: > Thanks for the patch. Some comments below... > > On Fri, Nov 10, 2017 at 11:32 AM, Robert P. J. Day > <rpjday@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Tweak a number of files to mention "view" as an alternative to > > "visualize": > > You probably want to end this sentence with a period, not a colon. not sure about that, what's the standard when you're introducing a code snippet? > > Documentation/git-bisect.txt | 9 ++++----- > > Documentation/user-manual.txt | 3 ++- > > builtin/bisect--helper.c | 2 +- > > contrib/completion/git-completion.bash | 2 +- > > git-bisect.sh | 4 ++-- > > 5 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) > > The diffstat belongs below the "---" separator, otherwise this text > will (undesirably) become part of the commit message proper. no, i actually want that as part of the commit message. my standard is, if there are 5 or more files that get changed, i like to include a diff --stat in the commit message so people viewing the log can get a quick idea of how much has changed. if that's not desired here, i can remove it. > > + git bisect visualize|view > > I think you need parentheses around these terms (see "git bisect > skip", for example): > > git bisect (visualize | view) ah, quite so. > However, in this case, it might be easier for readers if each is > presented on its own line (and subsequent discussion can make it clear > that they are synonyms). > > git bisect visualize > git bisect view > > But, that's a matter of taste... given the precedent already established: git bisect (bad|new|<term-new>) [<rev>] git bisect (good|old|<term-old>) [<rev>...] i'll go with the parentheses and no intervening spaces. i'll let that posting simmer for a bit longer before posting "v2". rday -- ======================================================================== Robert P. J. Day Ottawa, Ontario, CANADA http://crashcourse.ca Twitter: http://twitter.com/rpjday LinkedIn: http://ca.linkedin.com/in/rpjday ========================================================================