Re: [PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar)

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From: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" <kristoffer.haugsbakk@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Friday, December 09, 2016 3:51 PM
Add definite and indefinite articles in three places where they were
missing.

- Use "the" in front of a directory name
- Use "the" in front of "style of cooperation"
- Use an indefinite article in front of "CVS background"

Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@xxxxxxxxx>
---
Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
index 4546fa0d7..6c434aff3 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
@@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ $ git repack
will do it for you. If you followed the tutorial examples, you
would have accumulated about 17 objects in `.git/objects/??/`
directories by now. 'git repack' tells you how many objects it
-packed, and stores the packed file in `.git/objects/pack`
+packed, and stores the packed file in the `.git/objects/pack`
directory.

[NOTE]
@@ -1543,9 +1543,9 @@ like this:
Working with Others, Shared Repository Style
--------------------------------------------

-If you are coming from CVS background, the style of cooperation
+If you are coming from a CVS background, the style of cooperation
suggested in the previous section may be new to you. You do not
-have to worry. Git supports "shared public repository" style of
+have to worry. Git supports the "shared public repository" style of
cooperation you are probably more familiar with as well.

See linkgit:gitcvs-migration[7] for the details.
--
2.11.0

This looks good to me.
--
Philip (UK)



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