W dniu 30.07.2016 o 01:37, larsxschneider@xxxxxxxxx pisze: > From: Lars Schneider <larsxschneider@xxxxxxxxx> > > set_packet_header() converts an integer to a 4 byte hex string. Make > this function locally available so that other pkt-line functions can > use it. This description is not that clear that set_packet_header() is a new function. Perhaps something like the following Extract the part of format_packet() that converts an integer to a 4 byte hex string into set_packet_header(). Make this new function ... I also wonder if the part "Make this [new] function locally available..." is needed; we need to justify exports, but I think we don't need to justify limiting it to a module. If you want to justify that it is "static", perhaps it would be better to say why not to export it. Anyway, I think it is worthy refactoring (and compiler should be able to inline it, so there are no nano-performance considerations). Good work! > > Signed-off-by: Lars Schneider <larsxschneider@xxxxxxxxx> > --- > pkt-line.c | 15 ++++++++++----- > 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/pkt-line.c b/pkt-line.c > index 62fdb37..445b8e1 100644 > --- a/pkt-line.c > +++ b/pkt-line.c > @@ -98,9 +98,17 @@ void packet_buf_flush(struct strbuf *buf) > } > > #define hex(a) (hexchar[(a) & 15]) I guess that this is inherited from the original, but this preprocessor macro is local to the format_header() / set_packet_header() function, and would not work outside it. Therefore I think we should #undef it after set_packet_header(), just in case somebody mistakes it for a generic hex() function. Perhaps even put it inside set_packet_header(), together with #undef. But I might be mistaken... let's check... no, it isn't used outside it. > -static void format_packet(struct strbuf *out, const char *fmt, va_list args) > +static void set_packet_header(char *buf, const int size) > { > static char hexchar[] = "0123456789abcdef"; > + buf[0] = hex(size >> 12); > + buf[1] = hex(size >> 8); > + buf[2] = hex(size >> 4); > + buf[3] = hex(size); > +} > + > +static void format_packet(struct strbuf *out, const char *fmt, va_list args) It is strange how 'git diff' chosen to represent this patch... > +{ > size_t orig_len, n; > > orig_len = out->len; > @@ -111,10 +119,7 @@ static void format_packet(struct strbuf *out, const char *fmt, va_list args) > if (n > LARGE_PACKET_MAX) > die("protocol error: impossibly long line"); > > - out->buf[orig_len + 0] = hex(n >> 12); > - out->buf[orig_len + 1] = hex(n >> 8); > - out->buf[orig_len + 2] = hex(n >> 4); > - out->buf[orig_len + 3] = hex(n); > + set_packet_header(&out->buf[orig_len], n); > packet_trace(out->buf + orig_len + 4, n - 4, 1); > } > > -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html