On Sun, Mar 27, 2016 at 8:15 AM, Eric Sunshine <sunshine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Sat, Mar 26, 2016 at 3:48 PM, Pranit Bauva <pranit.bauva@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> parse-options.c: make OPTION__COUNTUP understand "unspecified" values > > A bit clearer: s/understand/respect/ > Also: s/__/_/ Sure. >> The reason to make it understand negative values or more specifically >> "unspecified" values is to give the ability to differentiate whether >> `--option` or `--no-option` was specified at all. > > The word "negative" shows up far too early in this paragraph, even > before "unspecified". It also fails utterly to explain what > "unspecified" means and how to use it. It does vaguely explain why > respecting "unspecified" is desirable (to know if --[no-]option was > seen), but otherwise leaves the reader quite clueless. > >> Many uses of COUNTUP have now been replaced with BOOL and what remains >> are verbose/quiet/force. This change will not affect existing users of >> COUNTUP at all, as long as they use the initial value of 0 (or more), as >> there is no mechanism to decrement. The only thing the command line can >> do is to reset it to zero with "--no-foo". > > Copying this paragraph verbatim from Junio's email[1] isn't > necessarily the best way to compose a commit message. Junio was > "thinking out loud" while justifying the change to himself as being > safe, but you ought to reframe this reasoning into a more concise form > which flows with the rest of the commit message, keeping the important > bits and dropping others. I will drop off some initial parts. >> Verbose or quiet don't use negative values before this commit but force >> uses it in a different way to handle its config and then munges the "-1" >> into 0 before we get to parse_options. > > Presumably, you're talking about a very specific instance of -1 in > conjunction with OPT__FORCE in builtin/clean.c, but that information > is entirely missing from this paragraph, thus this explanation serves > only to confuse rather than clarify. It is a good idea to cite this > specific unusual case when justifying that this change is safe, but it > must be accompanied by sufficient context for the reader to understand > what is being said. I will mention about OPT__FORCE in builtin/clean.c clearly. >> There are uses of COUNTUP in cmd_hash_object() and test-parse-options.c >> and they are both fine. > > What does "fine" mean? I know from reading the code that "fine" means > that these clients initialize the values to 0, thus should see no > behavioral difference. But why are these two cases called out > specially when they are already covered by the above "as long as they > use initial value of 0" explanation? As a reader, having these two > cases mentioned specially makes me wonder if I'm missing something > non-obvious about them. Its good to drop off this paragraph > It would probably be better to avoid mentioning cmd_hash_object() and > test-parse-options.c at all, and instead explain generally that, with > one exception (builtin/clean.c), all current clients of OPTION_COUNTUP > use an initial value of zero, thus are not impacted by this change. > And, then go on to explain builtin/clean.c's special case and why it > is safe, as well. > > > Sorry for seeming to be very picky, but if I hadn't already been > following this topic (and hadn't in fact suggested this particular > change), as a reader, I think I would find this commit message utterly > baffling, and wouldn't have a clue what this change is about or why it > is desirable. > > Perhaps it would be a good idea to re-read "(2) Describe your changes > well" in Documentation/SubmittingPatches for hints about writing a > good commit message, as well as Junio's recent re-stating[2] of those > hints. I don't disagree to your point and it is a bit difficult for me to explain stuff to other people especially when I know what's going on but other might not. > Try to write the commit message as if you were speaking to someone who > wasn't already familiar with the issue you're trying to solve. > Specifically, explain the problem ("no way to distinguish between > --[no-]option being seen or not"); explain the solution ("introduce an > 'unspecified' value"); the implementation of the "unspecified" value > ("any negative number" plus an example of how to make use of it); > justify that the change is safe ("existing clients of OPTION_COUNTUP > are not impacted because ..."). I will try and do this in the commit message. >> Signed-off-by: Pranit Bauva <pranit.bauva@xxxxxxxxx> >> --- >> The discussion about this patch: >> [1] : http://thread.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/289027 >> >> Previous version of the patch: >> [v1] : http://thread.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/289061 > > Unless I'm mistaken, the previous version was v9[3], not v1. > >> Changes introduced: >> Use a different language in commit message to make the change and its >> utility more clear. Also added some points as to where this patch could >> break but it doesn't. > > This version forgets to add the new tests to t0040-parse-options.sh > which SZEDER requested[4] to ensure that the new behavior works as > expected. > >> --- >> diff --git a/Documentation/technical/api-parse-options.txt b/Documentation/technical/api-parse-options.txt >> @@ -144,8 +144,12 @@ There are some macros to easily define options: >> >> `OPT_COUNTUP(short, long, &int_var, description)`:: >> Introduce a count-up option. >> - `int_var` is incremented on each use of `--option`, and >> - reset to zero with `--no-option`. >> + Each use of `--option` increments `int_var`, starting from zero >> + (even if initially negative), and `--no-option` resets it to >> + zero. To determine if `--option` or `--no-option` was set at >> + all, set `int_var` to a negative value, and if it is still > > I realize that you copied this text verbatim from the example I > gave[5], but in retrospect, I think s/set/initialize/ would be a bit > more clear: > > all, initialize `int_var` to a negative value, ... > >> + negative after parse_options(), then neither `--option` nor >> + `--no-option` was seen. > > [1]: http://article.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/289264/ > [2]: http://article.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/289757/ > [3]: http://thread.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/288820/focus=289724 > [4]: http://article.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/289733 > [5]: http://article.gmane.org/gmane.comp.version-control.git/289822 -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html