2015-05-03 17:54 GMT-06:00 Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx>: > Alex Henrie <alexhenrie24@xxxxxxxxx> writes: > >> Signed-off-by: Alex Henrie <alexhenrie24@xxxxxxxxx> >> --- >> builtin/branch.c | 2 +- >> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) >> >> diff --git a/builtin/branch.c b/builtin/branch.c >> index 1d15037..c0b4bae 100644 >> --- a/builtin/branch.c >> +++ b/builtin/branch.c >> @@ -972,7 +972,7 @@ int cmd_branch(int argc, const char **argv, const char *prefix) >> >> if (!branch) { >> if (!argc || !strcmp(argv[0], "HEAD")) >> - die(_("could not set upstream of HEAD to %s when " >> + die(_("could not set upstream of HEAD to %s because " >> "it does not point to any branch."), >> new_upstream); >> die(_("no such branch '%s'"), argv[0]); > > Thanks. > > To me neither sounds so funny, but both sound somewhat awkward, > primarily because it is unclear in the first reading what "it" in > "it does not point at any branch" refers to. > > Perhaps if you explain in the log message to illustrate why you > found it funny (and the update text is not), it might help, e.g. > > "git branch", ran with <this and that options>, when the current > branch is <in what state>, dies with > > fatal: could not set upstream of HEAD to frotz when it does not > point to any branch. > > which is funny <because of such and such reasons>. Saying "because" > makes it <better beause of such and such reasons>. > > I suspect that this message is about a nonsense attempt to set an > upstream for a detached HEAD perhaps? Then > > fatal: cannot set upstream for a detached HEAD > > may be shorter and more directly points at the root cause of the > error? I don't really understand what this code is doing. It just sounds funny to use "when" to join a phrase in the past tense with a phrase in the present tense. This error message can be triggered by running `git branch --set-upstream-to=origin/master` from a detached head. But if running from a detached head is the only way to trigger the error message, why does the code use strcmp instead of if (detached) { ... } as other code in that function does? Also, I missed the complementary error message "could not unset upstream of HEAD when it does not point to any branch." We should either change the "when" to a "because" in the second message too or rewrite both of these messages entirely. -Alex -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html