Thanks for the resubmission. Comments below... On Sat, Mar 22, 2014 at 11:12 AM, Ashwin Jha <ajha.dev@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Subject: [PATCH] Modify fsck_commit. Replace memcmp by skip_prefix In his review, Tanay already mentioned indicating a resubmission via [PATCH vN]. Additionally, specify the module or function being modified, followed by a colon and space. On this project, it is customary to forego capitalization in the subject (and only the subject). So, you might write: Subject: [PATCH v2] fsck_commit: replace memcmp() by skip_prefix() > Replace memcmp by skip_prefix as it serves the dual > purpose of checking the string for a prefix as well > as skipping that prefix. Good. > Signed-off-by: Ashwin Jha <ajha.dev@xxxxxxxxx> > --- Tanay mentioned this already: Below the "---" line under your sign-off is where you should, as a courtesy to reviewers, explain what changed since the previous attempt. Also, provide a link to the previous version, like this [1]. [1]: http://git.661346.n2.nabble.com/PATCH-GSoC-Miniproject-15-Rewrite-fsck-c-fsck-commit-td7606180.html > fsck.c | 25 ++++++++++++++----------- > 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/fsck.c b/fsck.c > index 64bf279..021b3fc 100644 > --- a/fsck.c > +++ b/fsck.c > @@ -6,6 +6,7 @@ > #include "commit.h" > #include "tag.h" > #include "fsck.h" > +#include "git-compat-util.h" > > static int fsck_walk_tree(struct tree *tree, fsck_walk_func walk, void *data) > { > @@ -284,21 +285,23 @@ static int fsck_ident(char **ident, struct object *obj, fsck_error error_func) > > static int fsck_commit(struct commit *commit, fsck_error error_func) > { > - char *buffer = commit->buffer; > + char *next_parent, *buffer = commit->buffer; The name 'next_parent' doesn't seem correct. After invoking skip_prefix(), this variable will point at the hex representation of the parent's SHA1, so a better name might be 'parent_id'. > unsigned char tree_sha1[20], sha1[20]; > struct commit_graft *graft; > int parents = 0; > int err; > > - if (memcmp(buffer, "tree ", 5)) > + buffer = (char *)skip_prefix(buffer, "tree "); These casts are ugly. It should be possible to get rid of all of them. Hint: Does this function modify the memory referenced by 'buffer'? (The answer is very slightly involved, though not difficult. A proper fix would involve turning this submission into a 2-patch series: one a preparatory patch, and the other this patch without the casts.) > + if (buffer == NULL) On this project, it is customary to say !buffer. Ditto for the remaining instances. > return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid format - expected 'tree' line"); > - if (get_sha1_hex(buffer+5, tree_sha1) || buffer[45] != '\n') > + if (get_sha1_hex(buffer, tree_sha1) || buffer[40] != '\n') > return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid 'tree' line format - bad sha1"); > - buffer += 46; > - while (!memcmp(buffer, "parent ", 7)) { > - if (get_sha1_hex(buffer+7, sha1) || buffer[47] != '\n') > + buffer += 41; > + while ((next_parent = (char *)skip_prefix(buffer, "parent ")) != NULL) { Likewise, on this project, it is customary to omit the '!= NULL'. > + buffer = next_parent; > + if (get_sha1_hex(buffer, sha1) || buffer[40] != '\n') > return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid 'parent' line format - bad sha1"); > - buffer += 48; > + buffer += 41; > parents++; > } > graft = lookup_commit_graft(commit->object.sha1); > @@ -322,15 +325,15 @@ static int fsck_commit(struct commit *commit, fsck_error error_func) > if (p || parents) > return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "parent objects missing"); > } > - if (memcmp(buffer, "author ", 7)) > + buffer = (char *)skip_prefix(buffer, "author "); > + if (buffer == NULL) > return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid format - expected 'author' line"); > - buffer += 7; > err = fsck_ident(&buffer, &commit->object, error_func); > if (err) > return err; > - if (memcmp(buffer, "committer ", strlen("committer "))) > + buffer = (char *)skip_prefix(buffer, "committer "); > + if (buffer == NULL) > return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid format - expected 'committer' line"); > - buffer += strlen("committer "); > err = fsck_ident(&buffer, &commit->object, error_func); > if (err) > return err; Other than the minor points mentioned above, the patch looks good. Thanks. > -- > 1.7.9.5 -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html