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On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 9:54 PM, Ashwin Jha <ajha.dev@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Subject: [PATCH] GSoC Miniproject 15. Rewrite fsck.c:fsck_commit()
The subject becomes part of the permanent Git history, but the fact
that this is a GSoC submission won't be meaningful to anyone months or
years from now. You can mention GSoC inside [...], however, as in
[PATCH GSoC], since that gets stripped off the subject automatically
when the patch is applied. Use the commentary section after the "---"
line just below your sign-off to explain that this is microproject 15.
The subject itself should concisely summarize the change. "Rewrite
fsck.c:fsck_commit()" doesn't say much. You might say instead:
Subject: fsk_commit: replace memcmp() with starts_with()
> modified fsck.c:fsck_commit(). Replaced memcmp() with starts_with() function.
Capitalize start of sentence.
Use imperative mood: "modify" rather than "modified"; "Replace" rather
than "Replaced".
> starts_with() seems much more relevant than memcmp(). It uses one less argument
> and its return value makes more sense.
As a justification, "uses one less argument" falls flat, and really
has nothing to do with the decision to make the change. The bit about
the return value is a slightly better but is still weak. You might
instead justify the change by pointing out that the name starts_with()
does a better job of conveying the intention of the code, which is to
check the string for a prefix, than does memcmp().
> skip_prefix() is not used as it uses strcmp() internally which seems unnecessarily
> for current task. The current task can be easily done by providing offsets to the
> buffer pointer (the way it is implemented currently).
Not sure what this means. What is the "current task", and what is
implemented where currently?
> Signed-off-by: Ashwin Jha <ajha.dev@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
> fsck.c | 11 ++++++-----
> 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/fsck.c b/fsck.c
> index 64bf279..82e1640 100644
> --- a/fsck.c
> +++ b/fsck.c
> @@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
> #include "commit.h"
> #include "tag.h"
> #include "fsck.h"
> +#include "strbuf.h"
>
> static int fsck_walk_tree(struct tree *tree, fsck_walk_func walk, void *data)
> {
> @@ -290,12 +291,12 @@ static int fsck_commit(struct commit *commit, fsck_error error_func)
> int parents = 0;
> int err;
>
> - if (memcmp(buffer, "tree ", 5))
> + if (!starts_with(buffer, "tree "))
> return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid format - expected 'tree' line");
> if (get_sha1_hex(buffer+5, tree_sha1) || buffer[45] != '\n')
One of the benefits of starts_with() and skip_prefix() is that they
allow you to eliminate magic numbers, such as 5 in the memcmp()
invocation. However, if you look a couple lines below, you see in the
expression 'buffer+5' that the magic number is still present. In fact,
the code becomes less clear with your change because the 5 in
'buffer+5' is much more mysterious without the preceding
memcmp(foo,"bar",5). It is possible to eliminate this magic number,
but starts_with() is not the answer.
> return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid 'tree' line format - bad sha1");
> buffer += 46;
> - while (!memcmp(buffer, "parent ", 7)) {
> + while (starts_with(buffer, "parent ")) {
> if (get_sha1_hex(buffer+7, sha1) || buffer[47] != '\n')
Ditto here with magic number 7 in 'buffer+7'.
> return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid 'parent' line format - bad sha1");
> buffer += 48;
> @@ -322,15 +323,15 @@ static int fsck_commit(struct commit *commit, fsck_error error_func)
> if (p || parents)
> return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "parent objects missing");
> }
> - if (memcmp(buffer, "author ", 7))
> + if (!starts_with(buffer, "author "))
> return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid format - expected 'author' line");
> buffer += 7;
And again with 7.
> err = fsck_ident(&buffer, &commit->object, error_func);
> if (err)
> return err;
> - if (memcmp(buffer, "committer ", strlen("committer ")))
> + if (!starts_with(buffer, "committer "))
> return error_func(&commit->object, FSCK_ERROR, "invalid format - expected 'committer' line");
> - buffer += strlen("committer ");
> + buffer += 10;
Again with 10 (newly introduced).
> err = fsck_ident(&buffer, &commit->object, error_func);
> if (err)
> return err;
> --
> 1.7.9.5
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