Eric Sunshine <sunshine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes: >> +Prepare a request to your upstream project to pull your changes to >> +their tree to the standard output, by summarizing your changes and >> +showing where your changes can be pulled from. > > Perhaps splitting this into two sentence (and using fewer to's) would > make it a bit easier to grok? Something like: > > Generate a request asking your upstream project to pull changes > into their tree. The request, printed to standard output, > summarizes the changes and indicates from where they can be > pulled. Thanks. >> +When the repository named by `<url>` has the commit at a tip of a >> +ref that is different from the ref you have it locally, you can use > > Did you want to drop "it" from this sentence? Or did you mean to say > "the ref as you have it locally"? Thanks for your careful reading. Will drop "it". -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html