On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:22 PM, Junio C Hamano <gitster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Eric Sunshine <sunshine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes: > >>> +When `git pull` that does not explicitly specify what branch from >>> +which repository is to be integrated with your history on the >>> +command line, recent Git will refuse to work until you specify how >>> +that integration should happen, either with a command line option >>> +(`--merge` or `--rebase`) or a configuration variable (`pull.rebase` >>> +or `branch.<name>.rebase`, which is the same as `--merge` >>> +(`--rebase`) when set to `false` (`true`) respectively. >> >> This paragraph-long single sentence may be intimidating. Perhaps some >> simplification is possible: >> >> As a safety measure, bare `git pull` (without repository or >> branch) needs to be told how to integrate pulled changes with >> your history; either via `--merge` or `--rebase`. Also see >> configuration variables `pull.rebase` and `branch.<name>.rebase` >> in linkgit:git-config[1]. >> >> I intentionally omitted the true/false explanation of the >> configuration variables since the user can follow the link and read >> about them. It also may make sense to drop mention of those variables >> altogether since they are already described (including link) in the >> description of --rebase. >> >> I also intentionally omitted "recent Git" since it's rather nebulous. > > Looks much better than the original. I would further suggest > dropping the "As a safety measure, bare " at the beginning. > > `git pull` (without repository or branch on the command line) > needs to be told how to integrate the changes with your > history via either `--merge` or `--rebase` (see configuration > variables `pull.rebase` and `branch.<name>.rebase` in > linkgit:git-config[1]). > > perhaps? That works; or without the mentioning the configuration variables at all (assuming the reader will discover them from reading --rebase description): `git pull` (without repository or branch on the command line) needs to be told how to integrate the changes with your history via either `--merge` or `--rebase`. Dropping the parenthetical comment might improve flow slightly: Without repository or branch on the command line, `git pull` needs to be told how to integrate the changes with your history, via either `--merge` or `--rebase`. With or without mention of the configuration options, either phrasing seems pretty easy to digest. -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html