Re: [PATCH 4/4] Documentation/git-commit.txt: correct a few minor grammatical mistakes

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On Mon, Feb 18, 2013 at 10:43 PM, Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Brandon Casey wrote:
>
>> --- a/Documentation/git-commit.txt
>> +++ b/Documentation/git-commit.txt
>> @@ -174,10 +174,10 @@ OPTIONS
>>  --cleanup=<mode>::
>>       This option sets how the commit message is cleaned up.
>>       The  '<mode>' can be one of 'verbatim', 'whitespace', 'strip',
>> -     and 'default'. The 'default' mode will strip leading and
>> +     or 'default'. The 'default' mode will strip leading and
>>       trailing empty lines and #commentary from the commit message
>> -     only if the message is to be edited. Otherwise only whitespace
>> -     removed. The 'verbatim' mode does not change message at all,
>> +     only if the message is to be edited. Otherwise only whitespace is
>> +     removed. The 'verbatim' mode does not change the message at all,
>>       'whitespace' removes just leading/trailing whitespace lines
>>       and 'strip' removes both whitespace and commentary. The default
>>       can be changed by the 'commit.cleanup' configuration variable
>
> Yeah, the current text is a bit choppy.  How about this?

Hmm, I think the original text was more confusing than I realized.  I
think we should reorder the cleanup modes, placing "default" last, and
then describe default in terms of either strip or whitespace depending
on whether an editor will be spawned.

> Signed-off-by: Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@xxxxxxxxx>
>
> --- i/Documentation/git-commit.txt
> +++ w/Documentation/git-commit.txt
> @@ -172,16 +172,25 @@ OPTIONS
>         linkgit:git-commit-tree[1].
>
>  --cleanup=<mode>::
> -       This option sets how the commit message is cleaned up.
> -       The  '<mode>' can be one of 'verbatim', 'whitespace', 'strip',
> -       and 'default'. The 'default' mode will strip leading and
> -       trailing empty lines and #commentary from the commit message
> -       only if the message is to be edited. Otherwise only whitespace
> -       removed. The 'verbatim' mode does not change message at all,
> -       'whitespace' removes just leading/trailing whitespace lines
> -       and 'strip' removes both whitespace and commentary. The default
> -       can be changed by the 'commit.cleanup' configuration variable
> -       (see linkgit:git-config[1]).
> +       This option determines how the supplied commit message should be
> +       cleaned up before committing. The '<mode>' can be `verbatim`,
> +       `whitespace`, `strip`, or `default`.
> ++
> +--
> +default::
> +       Strip leading and trailing empty lines and #commentary from
> +       the commit message only if the message is to be edited.
> +       Otherwise only remove whitespace.
> +verbatim::
> +       Do not change the message at all.
> +whitespace::
> +       Remove only leading and trailing whitespace lines.
> +strip::
> +       Remove both whitespace and commentary.

Let's reorder these.  Maybe something like this:

+strip::
+       Strip leading and trailing empty lines, trailing whitespace
and #commentary and
+       collapse consecutive blank lines into one.
+whitespace::
+       Same as "strip" except #commentary is not removed.
+verbatim::
+       Do not change the message at all.
+default::
+       "strip" if the message is to be edited.  Otherwise "whitespace".

> +--
> ++
> +The default can be changed using the 'commit.cleanup' configuration
> +variable (see linkgit:git-config[1]).
>
>  -e::
>  --edit::

-Brandon
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