Jeremy White <jwhite@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes: > Thanks for the feedback; new patch inbound. Minor nits: > >>> diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt >>> index f7815e9..92f97e6 100644 >>> --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt >>> +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt >>> @@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ $ git show-branch --topo-order --more=1 master mybranch >>> ------------------------------------------------ >>> >>> The first two lines indicate that it is showing the two branches >>> -and the first line of the commit log message from their >>> +and the first paragraph of the commit log message from their >>> top-of-the-tree commits, you are currently on `master` branch >>> (notice the asterisk `\*` character), and the first column for >>> the later output lines is used to show commits contained in the >> >> Ditto. > > I did not substantially alter this. The emphasis of this section > is on the broader show-branch output, and belaboring the subject would > be distracting and unnecessary imho. Yeah, but if that is the focus of this part of the documentation, wouldn't a patch to update "the first line" with something more generic like "title of the commit" be more appropriate? -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html