(adding Jeff to cc) Hi Florian and Junio, Junio C Hamano wrote: > The paragraph should first be restructured to describe read and write > cases separately, and then '--local' should be described, perhaps like > this? Thanks --- that makes a lot of sense to me. Florian, would you be interested in another go? The usual convention in cases like this is to start the subject line with something like "[PATCH v2]" so it is clear which version of the patch is supposed to be better than the other. Hope that helps, Jonathan -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html