On 12-01-18 05:27 PM, Junio C Hamano wrote: > Marc Branchaud <marcnarc@xxxxxxxxxxx> writes: > >> It might be better to just move the footnote to the end of the next sentence. > > Ok. How does this version look? The highlights are: > > * remove footnotes and spell them out inline, like "Note that..." > > * "a single liner" -> "a one-liner" IMO "one-liner" should be "one-line", but toMAYto toMAHto... The rest looks good. M. -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html