Hi Ville, Ville Skyttä wrote: > --- If this does not end up needing a re-roll, would it be okay for Junio (or whoever else picks up the patch) to forge your sign-off? (See "Sign your work" in Documentation/SubmittingPatches for what I mean.) > +++ b/Documentation/config.txt > @@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ Common unit suffixes of 'k', 'm', or 'g' are supported. > > core.deltaBaseCacheLimit:: > Maximum number of bytes to reserve for caching base objects > - that multiple deltafied objects reference. By storing the > + that multiple deltified objects reference. By storing the Huh? Maybe Maximum number of bytes to reserve for caching based objects that might be referenced by multiple deltified objects. Or: Amount of memory (in bytes) to reserve for speeding up unpacking of deltified objects. By storing entire decompressed base objects in a cache, Git can avoid unpacking and decompressing frequently-used base objects multiple times. > @@ -1275,7 +1275,7 @@ instaweb.local:: > be bound to the local IP (127.0.0.1). > > instaweb.modulepath:: > - The module path for an apache httpd used by linkgit:git-instaweb[1]. > + The module path for an Apache httpd used by linkgit:git-instaweb[1]. Maybe: Default module path for linkgit:git-instaweb[1] to use instead of /usr/lib/apache2/modules. Only used if httpd is Apache. > +++ b/Documentation/git-cvsserver.txt > @@ -366,8 +366,8 @@ CRLF Line Ending Conversions > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > By default the server leaves the '-k' mode blank for all files, > -which causes the cvs client to treat them as a text files, subject > +which causes the CVS client to treat them as a text files, subject Should we call the cvs(1) command "the CVS client"? Maybe "the cvs(1) client" or something would be clearer, but I don't see anything wrong with your choice. > -to crlf conversion on some platforms. > +to CRLF conversion on some platforms. This term can be confusing, as we've seen in other contexts. Maybe: subject to line-ending conversion on some platforms. > +++ b/Documentation/git-hash-object.txt > @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ OPTIONS > > --no-filters:: > Hash the contents as is, ignoring any input filter that would > - have been chosen by the attributes mechanism, including crlf > + have been chosen by the attributes mechanism, including CRLF > conversion. If the file is read from standard input then this It's called "end-of-line conversion" in gitattributes(5) now, apparently. The rest of this one looks good. Thanks. -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html