On Wed, Apr 14, 2021 at 7:42 PM Felix Miata <mrmazda@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Lukas Ruzicka composed on 2021-04-14 18:02 (UTC+0200):
> *On computers with a possibility to connect an external monitor (e.g. two
> monitors on a desktop and one external monitor on a laptop)...
"Desktop" to me implies not server, not tower, not mini-tower, not micro.
Strike "possibility". In use must be the use case, so:
* On computers using two displays
I like this beginning better ^
, dual video outputs on a common PC,
I don't think that a "common PC" is a better term than a "desktop PC".
or a
connected external display with a laptop display...
"On computers using two monitors (e.g. two monitors on a desktop, or the integrated screen and one external monitor on a laptop), the graphical output is correctly shown on both monitors."
I replaced "video" with "graphical output", to clear any possible confusion about movies playback :) The terms monitors/displays/screens are interchangeable, I guess? Native speakers should fine-tune this.
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