On Oct 22, 2013, at 1:33 PM, Adam Williamson <awilliam@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Tue, 2013-10-22 at 11:23 -0600, Chris Murphy wrote: >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Blocker_Bug_FAQ >> >> Existing: When a bug causes a criterion not to be met in some but not all cases, the teams involved in the release process will make a judgement as to whether the impact of the bug is severe enough to consider the release as a whole not to meet the release criteria. >> >> Suggested rewrite: When a bug causes a criterion violation for some yet not every instance, the teams involved in the release process will determine whether the bug's impact is severe enough to consider the release, as a whole, to not meet release criteria. > > What's the purpose of the change? To me they both say more or less the > same thing. I think your version is fine, I can't say which I think is > _better_ - if it's just intended to be a clearer version, and most > people find your version clearer, I'd be perfectly happy if it was > changed :) The double negative is confusing. And even the rewrite needs a comma between "some yet". It's just a totally A.R. clarity thing. Chris Murphy -- test mailing list test@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/test
