[Bug 464430] Review Request: k12linux-quick-start-guide - Doc describing how to enable LTSP on Fedora Live LTSP.

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--- Comment #33 from Patrice Dumas <pertusus@xxxxxxx>  2008-12-18 12:01:54 EDT ---
License is not right, should be CC-BY-SA.

Minor remarks:

I think that changelog is more readable with one empty line between each date,
like

* Thu Nov 13 2008 Peter Scheie <peter@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> - 0.0.2
- Updated screencapture image for step 8 to one in which the interface in
question is highlighted.

* Sun Oct 12 2008 Warren Togami <wtogami@xxxxxxxxxx> - 0.0.1
- initial package

Also you can use %{version} in the Source url to avoid changing it each
release, like
Source0:       
http://peterscheie.fedorapeople.org/k12linux/quick-start-guide/k12linux-quick-start-guide-%{version}.tar.bz2

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