Hi Huiren!
Thanks, you're right, sounds way better in the way you wrote it, I'll fix it.
Yes, you're right, it's "editing tools". I don't know why I wrote it the other way. Thanks for pointing out.
Cheers,
Sylvia
On Thursday, 9 June 2016, Huiren Woo <giantcrabby@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Sylvia,
Thanks for taking your time to write up this article! Amazing
screenshots as a visual reference!
Here are some comments:
"Edition tools" - Did you mean 'Editing tools'?
"It’s simple, tidy and lightweight, letting you manage your images
by tags, folders and sites." - English here is a little odd, might
wanna rephrase it to something like 'Its simplicity, tidiness allows
you to manage your images by tags, folders and sites. On top of that,
it's really lightweight.'
The ending is a bit abrupt, might be good to have something to sum it up.
Thanks!
Best Regards,
Woo Huiren
Fedora Ambassador & Marketing | Open Organization Ambassador
https://twitter.com/woohuiren
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